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Dr. Timothy X Merritt's avatar

I loved the way the whole meaning of the scene changed when the POV character perspective changed. Well done!

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Alina Barbu's avatar

Thank you so much for the comment! It makes me so happy when I see my work is liked!

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Josie White's avatar

There's always a different perspective.

Nicely written Alina

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Alina Barbu's avatar

Thank you so much Josie!

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Paul E's avatar

That was fun!

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Alina Barbu's avatar

Thank you Paul! Really happy you liked it! 💐

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